by lovetoreadXXX16
Loved the hot story hope they have her shave her pussy as they watch and wank over her
Ditched the stat the end of page one. What could have been a very mutual beneficial arrangement got blown off when the little bastards decided to fuck her over, by that I don’t mean some D/s.
They want to treat her like shit and get her fired as well, tough luck boys the real world is a hard place. The whole story is based on a CEO with a bruised ego. I prefer realism in my fantasies and this had great potential (from my perspective) for a hot reluctance story but I strongly doubt it’s going to go down that route.
Best of luck with your writing but out and out abuse isn’t my thing.
Tess (UK)
Good idea but poorly written. Very First Paragraph author says "He was going to make her pay for turning him down when he tried to hit her during the last " should be when he tried to hit ON her" true just one word missing but the reader has to try to figure out what trying to say. No need for me to take the effort to point out others but a good reviewer will find many. Too many other well written stories for the reader to waste time with this author.
"an older version of Jenna Jameson"
I gotta admit that kinda made me flacid