All Comments on 'MILF in Office Trouble Pt. 04'

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Dalmatian16Dalmatian16about 4 years ago
Great work

Keep going, keep up with the body enhancements

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
anal

they need to stretch her butthole permanently!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Great story

Keep writing

Ninjub needs to get his tip & clit piercing

kajkellikajkelliabout 4 years ago
right on Dalmatian

Oh, yes, what a delightful chapter! Take her deeper into sexual slavery. More body mods. Collar. So many hottttttttt possibilities.

pucker8551pucker8551about 4 years ago
great story

get her clit pierced her pussy tattooed and more pictures taken of her so they can black mail her after the job is done

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Yikes

Clearly written by a man who doesn't understand tampons or female arousal. Taking it out wouldn't make it flood out, do you think we plug our vaginas during our period and the period blood all pours out when we take it out? You also cant push out wet arousal? If you're american I can definitely see how the education system sucks. Its a good story but I got taken out of it for that :/

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
More!

Too super hot a story to end it here. Wonder if Sandeep could pay her another, more intimate, visit for a shave and worship session? Will Mary get her seat on the executive board, but only after an intensive BDSM/enema session with the female HRS Director who is also a skilled femdomme holding the deciding vote for Mary's election?

98991532129899153212over 2 years ago

This story had alot of potential...A power bitch being brought down step by step. But even fiction must be believable. I quit reading it when a couple of inexperienced kids, one with apparently the biggest dick in the world, called her a slut and she went into a slave trance. All of the agreements, videos and careful planning went right out the window. Then it was game on, she couldn't resist anything. Read your own stuff then change a few things to give it some reality.

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