by AlphaDynamic
That had to be one of the most confusing stories I've ever read!! Stop with the "your mother" " his mother " crap. Just replace "your mother" with Alice. One star.
Like many, I'm trying to figure out why this was directed at her son, and the audience is the kid? Lotta your mothers, and at one point it says "football star at her son's college. This makes no sense? Why would we be into our hot mom getting with some random qb?
Get a bit of knowledge about human anatomy - it'll help with credibility.
I love the cervix fuck (although it is anatomically impossible it's still a huge fetish of mine), The "your mother" stuff seems a bit confusing but overall this is one of my favorite stories here, keep it up!