All Comments on 'Milfdom Ch. 02'

by Darren13

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Highpike 9 months ago

Community College had a very promising start but lost its way it chapter two and you appear to have given up on it. I think this story is losing its way too. It would be good if you let us know your intentions.

Anonymous9 months ago

Keep writing!!

Anonymous9 months ago

It's ok but Community College is your best, hope to see lots more of that one.

DINGDONG33 8 months ago

Good story and lots of fun he is trying hard.

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I am unable to continue my stories for a while, my pain meds have been changed and it's had an unfortunate effect on my concentration. I’m going to start deleting all anonymous critiques, if you have something to say surely you can without hitting the anonymous button. I’m hap...

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