All Comments on 'Military Park Workout Pt. 01'

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yowseryowserover 2 years ago

Outdoorsy

A sweet little fantasy, outside and cycling, nice combo. A little over the top (good voyeur views are tough to come by and usually fraught) but nice descriptions. Would love to hear a bit more about the surroundings (what kind of trees? Any breeze rustling the leaves? Air temp?) but appealing characters and some promise of more.

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