All Comments on 'Milked by a Stranger'

And? Where's the rest of it? You're missing the ending.

Fuck yes

Lovely premise.

Nice story. Moves a bit fast, though. It'd have been better if everything wasn't so rushed.

After the first handjob, there needed to be some down time before Act 2 ensued. Perhaps dialog about his previous jerking off. How often did he do it? Did he watch porn while jerking? What kind? What is it that gets him to lose control and cum? Would he like to do that with her?

And she asked him if he was a virgin. Was he? It never gets answered.

Stopped so abruptly. Need more.

Five stars (despite the shortcomings).

Pretty cute.

Very nice, 5 stars. Always loved stories with sexually aggressive gentle femdom ladies.

Why start a story in past tense and then continue it in present tense?

Awful writing no matter how good the content of the story is. Learn before you write.