by anonymousmuse
Interesting premise.
But the sex is super rushed. Needed much more in the way of foreplay/teasing/edging before he got to cum even once.
And a permanently shrunken cock is a real turn off.
Three stars.
I enjoyed it! Thank you.
Original concept with many places to go with it. As one previous critic said, more detail and build up would be nice but it's a first story so don't take it too much to heart :)
Looking forward to reading more!
Absolutely amazing story! You combined two of my favorite fetishes. Cock milking and penis shrinking. I only wish it was longer. I hope you write more stories!