All Comments on 'Milked by Matilda'

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rdoolittlerdoolittle10 months ago
Unusual

Very original...hope you write more.

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

Interesting premise.

But the sex is super rushed. Needed much more in the way of foreplay/teasing/edging before he got to cum even once.

And a permanently shrunken cock is a real turn off.

Three stars.

maninblack28maninblack289 months ago

I enjoyed it! Thank you.

Original concept with many places to go with it. As one previous critic said, more detail and build up would be nice but it's a first story so don't take it too much to heart :)

Looking forward to reading more!

sphlover1sphlover19 months ago

amazing one, please keep your style and write alot more

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Absolutely amazing story! You combined two of my favorite fetishes. Cock milking and penis shrinking. I only wish it was longer. I hope you write more stories!

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