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His hands were getting better too, although the plaster still had a couple more weeks before it could come off.
When we were in the hospital room, waiting with excitement for his blindfold to be removed, there was a palpable sense of jubilation from everyone, especially Jacob.
It was difficult to imagine what it might feel like for him to be able to see again after weeks of darkness.
The Doctor removed the external bandages and explained to Jacob that to begin with he would have to wear polarized sunglasses, so that he could adjust gradually to seeing over the coming days. It was safer this way than transitioning straight back to natural light.
But as the Doctor removed the gauze that I had been diligently re-applying for Jacob, he paused for a moment and said:
"This gauze hasn't been fully covering your left eye. Did it slip down?"
"It's been that way for a few weeks," said Jacob.
"Have you had any visual activity?" asked the Doctor.
"Yes," said Jacob. "I've been able to see the whole time. Out of one crack in the left side ... It was only a keyhole view, but I haven't been blind."
I almost spat out the mouthful of 7-Up I was drinking, and my face went a bright shade of cabernet.
"That's wonderful news," said the Doctor, "it suggests your vision is healing fast."
He placed a cool-looking pair of sunglasses on my brother's face.
"It's because my sister took such good care of me," Jacob said.
And he blew me a kiss.
***
Now Mom was back home, I could no longer wash or milk my brother, and he no longer invited me to.
So I began fucking him.
- COMMENTS
Anonymous15 days agoWell constructed story keeping my attention. A wonderful read.
An aside:
Having been in a much worse situation for considerably longer, I greatly appreciated the paragraph in part 1 I believe.
I never felt lucky and when anyone said so it irked me. Fortunate it was not worse. Yes most definately.
dasgoodshit4 months agogreat nurse/shower story. it feels like at least 90% of the story is in the shower after the action starts, as it should be. good description of their encounters, too. the requisite "i shouldn't be doing this, so why do i like it" ideas are there, but they aren't as dramatic as they often are in incest stories. very natural feel to it.
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although i wasn't keen on the deception, you did very nice work structuring the cheerleading plotline, sprinkling in the idea through dialogue, then writing two short scenes at practice just so having traci in the bathroom with them didn't feel clunky and forced. those first two scenes would have been otherwise unnecessary, but you actually made use of each scene. nice.
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less favorably, i have to say that the description of his riding accident has _no_ place in an erotic story. a thorny bush and scratched retinas? that's a boner killer right there. i get that you felt like it had to be explained, but things like that don't always have to be. "after the accident, he spent a week in the hospital before coming home." much shorter and cleaner, and best of all there's no boner murder. if you feel like you absolutely have to explain something like that, go with a flash of light or something similar, please.
Anonymous4 months agoLovely premise.
But all of the handjob action was much too automatic. Much to quick starting. Much too quick ending.
Needed to slow down. Needed dialog, once it becme the routine, to discuss if what she was doing was the way he really liked it.
Did he want it faster? Slower?
Did/would he enjoy having his balls played with?
Could he smell how excited she was becoming while masturbating him? Did that excite him further?
Why didn't she put her breasts/nipples in his mouth so they both could enjoy it?
She could have offered him the chance to lick her pussy, but didn't.
Only once did she finger his asshole. That's it?
Four stars.
ExperienceCounts9 months agoNicely constructed story... love the characters and the surprise ending. Really entertaining read. Thanks.
