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That took my breath away; I'd not been expecting that and the words had barely registered in my brain, but I knew that she was right. "Okay, I agree."
It was a year later that we set off to the hospital. We were ready; we had a nursery, clothes and toys. Fiona was nervous and I was excited, we were going to have our own little girl.
Jess and Victoria peeped round the door and then came over to the bed. Jess smiled as she asked, "Are you okay?" Fiona nodded and I saw them both look down at the beautiful little bundle that Fiona held close to her breast.
"Would you like to take her?" Jess took the baby into her arms and Victoria leaned in to get a better look before she took Fiona's hand.
"Oh, Fiona, I'm so proud of you, she's gorgeous. Have you thought of a name for the little one?"
Fiona nodded, I saw a tear in the corner of her eye, she paused, "I'd like to you meet your granddaughter, Milly; Milly Victoria Jess Scott. It would've been Milly's birthday tomorrow."
Jess took a pause; there were tears forming in her eyes as well as she looked down, "How lovely to meet you, Milly. I hope that you're as wise, funny, loving, talented and beautiful as your namesake, my little one."
Victoria hugged me as I stood beside the bed holding Fiona's hand. The two of us would love and care for this Milly as much as Fiona and I had done for the other one.
The End
This is the end of Milly Scott's life and story. I fell in love with Milly soon after I started writing about her and despite the fact that she is a fictional character, I'll miss her, but it had to end. There will be another story about Fiona and Jane's daughter in due course and I have some ideas for spin off stories.
Thank you for reading, I love reading your comments.
- COMMENTS
dragonlover114 days agoeven after reading these stories about Milly and co. so many times I still cry at Millies passing.
(60yr old male) this was and will remain my favourite series of stories on this site
thanks so much for writing them
FlynDutchman3 months agoWhat a wonderful heart wrenching story. Thank you for your true devotion to your characters in creating such impactful stories. A tearful farewell with anticipation for what’s coming next.
Anonymous4 months agoMilly Scott, what a wonderful story that, as you say, although fictional is a truly wonderful tale and very heartbreaking throughout but with some great joy and happiness all woven into a great "saga" with a tremendous ending. I can see why you "fell in love" with Milly. I can't wait for more tales about Fiona, Jane and their daughter Milly - as well as the spin offs. Please don't stop writing your wonderful stories.
Purplefizz6 months agoThis isn’t my first time reading this series, it’s not even my second, it’s my third - and I’m still sitting here typing through my tears. We all have people in our past that are no longer with us, we miss them, adapt and life carries on, but maybe once, twice in a lifetime we have people who leave such a big hole in our lives, that we cannot adapt, we have to start almost from the beginning to rebuild our lives when they go. I think part of the success of this story series is that you’ve captured that feeling of utter desolation that is left in deaths wake for those “Special” people we love and lose.
Many thanks for both writing and posting this series of stories here on Lit for us to enjoy, best wishes, Ppfzz. 5⭐️
Roti8211Chanai6438 months agoOutstanding!
Every part was beautifully told and written!
I will miss Milly, Fiona, and Jayne!
So so good!
Thank you for sharing this beautiful story!
ca_dave9 months agoI have read this story several times. Even knowing the out come, I still bawl like a baby. Thank you for this wonderful talent. And I too miss Milly, Fiona, and Jane.
xtrail65over 1 year agoOh my goodness, I have tears down my cheeks, I know what you mean when you say you love Millie. I have no more words. Astounding.
Anonymousover 1 year agoAn astoundingly good series! 5 stars for each part. Thank you for sharing your talent with us.
Anonymousover 1 year agoGreat story, really good development of characters and so easy to empathise with what's happen.
Anonymousover 1 year agoHaving just finished the Milly Scott series, I'm emotionally exhausted. What a ride! A wonderfully crafted story IMHO. 5 stars throughout. As an added bonus, my home area, the Lake District gets honorable mention. I do so hope that Milly made it across to the quieter, but just as beautiful, western lakes. Thanks so much for sharing your work.
Camguy4funalmost 2 years agoI came across your stories by chance and took your advice for the order in which to read. I just finished the last of the Milly Scott series and all I can say is wow! What a terrific series of stories. The characters came to live for me and I could envision them as I read. Like almost every commenter noted, I too shed more tears in these stories than I have for any other I have read in a very long time. 5 stars all the way! You have a real gift!
ca_daveabout 2 years agoWhen I read the first part of this series I was unsure how I felt. As I sit her bawling like a baby I have no doubts at all. I love this story but as others have said I am not sure if I can face reading this again. 5* thank you for making me cry my eyes out. You are a very talented aurthor.
Anonymousabout 2 years agoI am not clever enough to add any more to the comments below(yes I read them all!) and loved and agreed with just about all of them. The tale was amazing and kept me enthralled for quite a while as I wanted to draw out each character and event. Now that I have finished these epic tales I would like to thank you wholeheartedly for this mammoth piece of artistic romance. Please continue this into infinity if needs be until you run out of words for the Milly saga. TLC and hugs to you.
vandeheideabout 2 years agoThe Milly Scott series of stories are so beautifully penned. For me, the best of all I have read on Literotica. I can understand how you, Sandy, had fallen in love with a character that you created. It is though Milly has had such an influence on you as she did with everybody she came into contact with.
I challenge anybody to not shed tears when reading this wonderful masterpiece of the life of Milly Scott. Thank you so much.
