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That took my breath away; I'd not been expecting that and the words had barely registered in my brain, but I knew that she was right. "Okay, I agree."
It was a year later that we set off to the hospital. We were ready; we had a nursery, clothes and toys. Fiona was nervous and I was excited, we were going to have our own little girl.
Jess and Victoria peeped round the door and then came over to the bed. Jess smiled as she asked, "Are you okay?" Fiona nodded and I saw them both look down at the beautiful little bundle that Fiona held close to her breast.
"Would you like to take her?" Jess took the baby into her arms and Victoria leaned in to get a better look before she took Fiona's hand.
"Oh, Fiona, I'm so proud of you, she's gorgeous. Have you thought of a name for the little one?"
Fiona nodded, I saw a tear in the corner of her eye, she paused, "I'd like to you meet your granddaughter, Milly; Milly Victoria Jess Scott. It would've been Milly's birthday tomorrow."
Jess took a pause; there were tears forming in her eyes as well as she looked down, "How lovely to meet you, Milly. I hope that you're as wise, funny, loving, talented and beautiful as your namesake, my little one."
Victoria hugged me as I stood beside the bed holding Fiona's hand. The two of us would love and care for this Milly as much as Fiona and I had done for the other one.
The End
This is the end of Milly Scott's life and story. I fell in love with Milly soon after I started writing about her and despite the fact that she is a fictional character, I'll miss her, but it had to end. There will be another story about Fiona and Jane's daughter in due course and I have some ideas for spin off stories.
Thank you for reading, I love reading your comments.
- COMMENTS
FlynDutchman23 days agoWhat a wonderful heart wrenching story. Thank you for your true devotion to your characters in creating such impactful stories. A tearful farewell with anticipation for what’s coming next.
Anonymousabout 2 months agoMilly Scott, what a wonderful story that, as you say, although fictional is a truly wonderful tale and very heartbreaking throughout but with some great joy and happiness all woven into a great "saga" with a tremendous ending. I can see why you "fell in love" with Milly. I can't wait for more tales about Fiona, Jane and their daughter Milly - as well as the spin offs. Please don't stop writing your wonderful stories.
Purplefizz4 months agoThis isn’t my first time reading this series, it’s not even my second, it’s my third - and I’m still sitting here typing through my tears. We all have people in our past that are no longer with us, we miss them, adapt and life carries on, but maybe once, twice in a lifetime we have people who leave such a big hole in our lives, that we cannot adapt, we have to start almost from the beginning to rebuild our lives when they go. I think part of the success of this story series is that you’ve captured that feeling of utter desolation that is left in deaths wake for those “Special” people we love and lose.
Many thanks for both writing and posting this series of stories here on Lit for us to enjoy, best wishes, Ppfzz. 5⭐️
Roti8211Chanai6436 months agoOutstanding!
Every part was beautifully told and written!
I will miss Milly, Fiona, and Jayne!
So so good!
Thank you for sharing this beautiful story!
ca_dave8 months agoI have read this story several times. Even knowing the out come, I still bawl like a baby. Thank you for this wonderful talent. And I too miss Milly, Fiona, and Jane.
