All Comments on 'Milly's Bitten Wish'

This does not belong here. This should be a book. Thoroughly enjoyable read. Not a shag in sight, but maybe when you write your book it will contain some gratuitous sex.

Keep going!

This is so beautiful. I have to agree with the previous commenter.

Poor Clarissa :/

I have read 2 of your stories, and they are truly great works. They are compelling and "erotic". I put "erotic" in quotes because the eroticism is not for titillation; it moves the story along. It is written thoughtfully and insightfully and in that becomes sensual without sensational. Both stories of young women on their journey to join Mr C's universe/ story and that is the focus. My only suggestion would be to take us a little deeper post transformation. I would love to see that side of the journey and the new people/entities as they transform more into Mr. C's story.