Mina's Young Lover

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Mina stayed siyting on David, surprised at the continued feeling of fullness, as his dick very slowly deflated. "Come, we had better get showered." Mina suggested.

Mina went in to the bathroom, set the shower temperature just right and shouted to David who was still in bed, "well come on then." David walked in to the bathroom; Mina's sexy shape barely visible through the now steamed up shower door. He opened the door, to see Mina, her hair tied in a bun, skin glistening from the water. Putting her arms around his neck, she pushed her lips to his and kissed him deeply. Eventually pulling away, she grabbed a sponge and started soaping him down, offering him the sponge in a silent request for him to return the favour.

Finished, they exited the shower and towelled themselves dry, before returning to the bedroom where David got dressed. He sat on the bed, watching Mina as she wiped and rubbed moisturiser, over her body. Conscious of David watching her, Mina stood, legs parted as she rubbed up and down her legs, standing up she moisturised her tits causing her dark nipples to shine.

Mina went to her wardrobe and picking out a casual summer dress, put it over her head and allowed it to fall down around her body. "Come," she said, "let me make you some breakfast."

They were eating breakfast when Mina, heard the doorbell. Opening up she saw Chloe with a slight look of concern on her face.

"Mina is Dav... Oh, there you are," Chloe said relieved, seeing David at the dining table eating.

"Yeah, we came back quite late last night and didn't want to disturb you, so David slept on my sofa."

Chloe, looked at Mina's sofa, still containing a few items casually strewn around that she recognised from the day before and gave Mina a questioning looks unseen by David. Mina simply winked back, the gesture again unseen by David and nothing more was said about it.


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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Tomato tomatoe

While it’s true you have more grammatical errors in this story than you do most of your others , and an editor or spell checker may do it some justice , it wasn’t so bad as to make me pause and reread a sentence or two , trying to ascertain your meaning or anything that really distracted from YOUR story ! I have read all but one of your stories in the Geoff / Mina series , and correct me if I’m wrong here , but isn’t this particular story one of , if not THE , last in the series ? So someone would have to surmise that you followed a naturally occurring theme to coincide with and further along your overall theme in your ongoing series , correct ? So logically this story was not plagiarized as the difficulty would have been in forcing the author to prequel each one of these stories in this series and in their subsequent releases ! That would be a difficult task to perform ! I am more than positive , dear author , that there was no plagiarism, and that this story is a fitting story inside your sequel , which is a product of YOUR imagination and your penmanship ! And to think you took undue rights and stole it is absurd and demeaning , to say the least ! This is YOUR brainchild and I like the way your raising it , good parenting ! No one should accuse you of abduction or of adopting your brainchild without evidence , and I think I’ve proven my point ! So let’s keep on watching you raise your children the way you choose, as you have very talented parenting skills !!!

Sometimes_ManytimesSometimes_Manytimesover 3 years agoAuthor
Patwhite, Plagiarism?

That is a BIG accusation. Please research or dig deep in to your archives and try to confirm it.

patwhite1970patwhite1970over 3 years ago
Errors and proof reading

A few errors. You need a proof reader. Nice story. But I think I read it before buy another author.

Sometimes_ManytimesSometimes_Manytimesover 3 years agoAuthor
Thank you

I have more screw ups than you can begin to imagine Sir, or Madam. I have read many other readers, but have not listed any, for not other reason than I know who I like and what I like. I do not need to list them for others.

A good proof reader you certainly have appoint with. It’s a learning thing. I’d like to get to know a good proof reader / editor, but I haven’t yet. If you would like to step up, I’m open to discussions. If anyone is for that matter, please step forward. Literotica is a first for me, so I would appreciate the help.

Thank you for the feedback.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Badly need a proof-reader

Mina stayed siyting - whas she shyting - usually spelt shitting, or what?

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