All Comments on 'Mind Games'

by Julie20

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LordSlamdawggLordSlamdawggover 12 years ago
Good Concept , SoSo Execution

Ive read better & I've read ( much) worse . The payoff never quite came - annoying because the set up was there. In the End Analysis,I find it hard to believe you explore these themes IRL but you had me believing for a bit. Good on you for that much.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

I think you tried to put too much in. Rated 'good', till the rubbish tip part reduced it to 'okay'.

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