by Danni_Iridescent
You should give the reader some warning if there will be bi-sexual or gay activity. Especially if the buildup to the scene is implying that the other guy was going to be taken elsewhere by a female character. It is a turn off for some.
Very hot. Gay does nothing for me but I sort of skimmed those parts because the rest of us was so good. Normally I don't read those stories at all.
Great characters, fantastic sex scenes. Petulant jerk in one chapter, redeemed in the next. And here, you took me down a path I wouldn’t normally go… and I didn’t hate it. You are good.
Should've given a warning or at least put gay stuff in the tags, personally I have nothing against it but clearly this resulted in a lot of people no longer wanting to continue reading this series.
FWIW appreciate the bi content a lot, nice to see bi dudes actually represented in any erotica. Plus you did set it up back at the start so... I say ignore the haters.