All Comments on 'Mind Writing Pt. 07: Sam'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Mm gay things not my thing. Nice story until now but I'll stop reading

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

You should give the reader some warning if there will be bi-sexual or gay activity. Especially if the buildup to the scene is implying that the other guy was going to be taken elsewhere by a female character. It is a turn off for some.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Very hot. Gay does nothing for me but I sort of skimmed those parts because the rest of us was so good. Normally I don't read those stories at all.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Loved the bisexual twist. Keep it coming.

ClavinMobClavinMobover 2 years ago

+1 for the bisexual twist. Really did it for me

44chicken44chickenover 2 years ago

Great characters, fantastic sex scenes. Petulant jerk in one chapter, redeemed in the next. And here, you took me down a path I wouldn’t normally go… and I didn’t hate it. You are good.

LetthatsinkinLetthatsinkinover 2 years ago

Should've given a warning or at least put gay stuff in the tags, personally I have nothing against it but clearly this resulted in a lot of people no longer wanting to continue reading this series.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

FWIW appreciate the bi content a lot, nice to see bi dudes actually represented in any erotica. Plus you did set it up back at the start so... I say ignore the haters.

JohnnyRebBBJohnnyRebBBabout 1 year ago

You still need a series linkage

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