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All Comments on 'Mind Writing Pt. 09: Gabriella'

by Danni_Iridescent

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HotYoungCoupleHotYoungCoupleover 2 years ago

What a cliffhanger! Love it 😀

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

nice

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Super hot chapter. Making his pregnant now that's hotter. Hannah will probably want her own bundle of joy 😉

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Good story overall but the characters are kinda weak and just seem to be there to advance the will of the author. I would honestly prefer it if you cut most of them and instead focused on developing what you have.

ClavinMobClavinMobover 2 years ago

Another solid chapter! Keep them coming! Only one note: Jamie never said "blanket" a second time

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Keep writing!

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