All Comments on 'Mine! Ch. 05'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Chyna,

I won't even complain because it was worth the wait. Thanks girl.

Alpha_MarmAlpha_Marmabout 12 years ago
Open house finally............

It is about time girlfriend came clean with him about HER pain. Never mind masking, trying to stay walled off. SHE lost THEIR child because HE stressed her out.

Let him know!!! Darlin' you created the situation; now deal with it. I think Blake has some real serious reviewing in front of him in order to get it right. He needs to come correct. At least she recognized he married someone else after she left him out of whatever...loneliness..anger...rejection... She is growing up and can see the bigger picture.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago

LOVIN, LOVIN, LOVIN IT

HoldingStacieDownHoldingStacieDownabout 12 years ago
Super well worth the wait !!!

I'm actually doing a Happy dance . This update was so good . I'm so glad the real truth finally came out . Can't wait to see what happens next . Great job !

NightpleasureNightpleasureabout 12 years ago

I really did enjoy the chapter. I hope the chapters are longer.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
blake

needs a freaking relity check. Talk about life long abuse.. what a crazy man.

fluerfluerabout 12 years ago

This story is so f***king good!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago

mind blowing.Blake needs to sort his mind out.

MadameblaqueMadameblaqueabout 12 years ago
Wow

Blake doesn't know what he wants and she needs to move on from him and find someone who appreciates her.

Janez9Janez9about 12 years ago
Love It!!!

oh I can't wait for what happens next!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Please update <3

Iv been waiting ages please update?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
wtf is up with blake??

He is so random and over the top. He is strong in wanting her one minute and then flips into a confused teen that got angry and married someone else yet moved into her apt. to take over her sanctuary and continue his lifestyle was just shitty. She needs to stop wimping out and let him know what he is doing is emotionally tearing her up. When you love someone you don't continue to cause then pain like that. The characters need a little maturing before they can come together into something awesome.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
please we all know how its going to end

them toghter and shit no different from any other story why dont people but a twist on there stories blake should not even get her she should get a good man instead of blake

got2luvmelgot2luvmelabout 12 years ago
more interested

In Michael and Cady than this pairing; Blake gets on my damn nerves, flip-flopping all over the damn place!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago

please update this story soon cant wait for next chapter

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
more?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

ok seriously is there going to be more?

kitty5670kitty5670almost 12 years ago
More

Please write more. I love this story!

SenieceTaOSenieceTaOalmost 12 years ago
*****

please update soon .. its a great story and i love these characters..

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

just stopping by and checking for an update

browneyes213browneyes213over 11 years ago
MORE

please finish this off !!!!

mrskelleymrskelleyover 11 years ago
Please Finish!!!

They are to cute.

luv_romanceluv_romanceover 11 years ago
What is next?

Pls continue the story

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
ummm more?

are you going to continue?

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
amazing story

please hurry up and continue with this story im so anxious to know what happens next...................update soon please

ChynaMarieChynaMarieover 11 years agoAuthor
IM BACK

I'm back from bootcamp so watch out for my writing:)

HarperSiclaireHarperSiclaireover 11 years ago
Feenin!

I need you to finish! I need it!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
:D

This story is so hot and just... ugh, one of my favourites. Can't wait for the updates

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
I like the story but...............

She is a scary ass idiot... women that flighty make me wish I had a penis...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
please

I like this story!!! Are you going to finish this?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Please finish!!

I feel like I was left holding a half empty glass!! PLEASE fill my glass to the brim!!

london101london101almost 11 years ago

And i thought this was supposed to be interracial?

AMHJ89AMHJ89over 10 years ago

You're killing me over here, I'm dangling on the cliff by my thumbs I must know more

D3stin2L0v3D3stin2L0v3over 10 years ago

I hope you are going to finish this. I would like to see were this story goes. I honest do not understand how Blake could marry someone else if he LOVED Bailey so much. No excuse for that.

chocolatesistachocolatesistaabout 10 years ago
wth

Your not done yet, right?

SexyRose20SexyRose20almost 10 years ago
plz continue this story plz

Plz plz plz plz plz plz plz finish this story

Dat_girlDat_girlover 9 years ago
ughhh

Morrrrreeeeee

St0rMiESt0rMiEover 9 years ago
Not worth anything...

Have someone edit it.

Good storyline but shitty presentation!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
FINISH IT!!!!

PLEASE FINISH THIS STORY!!! LOVE IT!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Are you okay?

I hope so cause I've been waiting for this story to continue. 😌

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Please continue

I love this story please continue...

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
PLEASE CONTINUE

Please continue i love ur story. Ill help u edit if thats what it takes huhu its hard to find quality stories here :((((

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago

Please finish this.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
?

Do you maybe post your stories somewhere else now?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Sad

Page 2 of final chapter had nothing and the whole story was misspelled words or sentences that made no sense. Won’t be reading anything else by you

Allegedly_LiterateAllegedly_Literateover 2 years ago

Um, so that's it? No follow up on them going out, finding out who's trying to kill Bailey? Do Blake & Bailey get together? 🤷🏽‍♀️

SayDSayDover 1 year ago

What! That's all we get? This is how it ends?

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