All Comments on 'Minor Setback'

by Joeehartley

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jay1459jay1459over 2 years ago

Great story - wish I was there.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

A bit of a let down, needs to further and not stop. The situation with his aunt, her friends, the male neighbour, and Carol.

SmuttyandfunSmuttyandfunover 2 years ago

Great story. Really hot!

JoeehartleyJoeehartleyover 2 years agoAuthor

To the anonymous commenter who thought this story was a bit of a let down. Like most of my work, if I receive enough feedback asking for more there will be a follow up. I was not certain this story would be well received since the earlier submission was not liked.

Uniquelyme60Uniquelyme60over 2 years ago

I think the story line is great. I would like to see it continue if you are inclined to do so. However, please try to be a bit more consistent with the spelling of the aunt's name. I gave it 4 stars.

KallMeTTKallMeTTover 2 years ago

Always appreciate your stories!

HoltarenHoltarenalmost 2 years ago

Brilliant. I really like your style of writing. Look forward to many more episodes as well as many more stories.

KittyLover80KittyLover80over 1 year ago

Excellent story, nice light plot, complementing characters. I hope you continue with more chapters. Thanks

maddictmaddict11 months ago

Delightful. Is aunt Jeannie nude with Kevin all the time. I sure hope she has a lot of interrelated friends. A party for her friends with Kevin, is that possible

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