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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Interesting premise

Lots of sex. But it happens BOOM full on without enough buildup -- and it's the buildup, the details, that make it erotic. nd here' what could have been erotic mostly wasn't.

I gave it three stars.

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Male half of a happy, fun couple who enjoys fantasizing and exploring our sexuality. My muse is an amazing woman in every way and I enjoy giving her pleasure and exciting her in any way i can. She enjoys stories, so here I am. We also explore on SLS under the same name.

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