All Comments on 'Miranda's Desire'

A wonderfully-complex and very erotic story of blackmail and seduction. The masturbation scene and the ultimate sexual encounter between the experienced teacher and the young student are two of the sexiest passages I've read on this site.

Once again, Small&Cute proves why she is among the best and brightest authors that Literotica has. All of her stories are highly erotic and written like a professional with well crafted plots, characters, and flow. Please keep up the good work and write more more more!

Naomi

Hi S and C. Saw you in chat this morning and checked your stories. Glad I did as your new one was written on my birthday. I loved it. The story was so daring and yet so realistic and could happen very easily. I have enjoyed all your stories and especially when I get to say hi in the room. I think this story leaves open the possibility of Miranda having Julie service not only her but others of her choosing. Mmmmmm many more chapters and a fullfillment of my wants and needs. ( sorry for the selfishness ) love and keep up the good work wendymom

Miranda so captures the ebb and flow of feelings that occur. The uncertainty, desire and shifting of control are so real, accurate, and wonderfully portrayed within her characters. thanks you s&c!...sara

I abosulty love the fear that the teacher had. I enjoyed how she finally reflected the reprocussions on her student; and then took full control of the situtation. Again; great writing, and highly arousing.

This story was long and erotic the whole way though, there was never a dull moment....the chemistry between the two was amazing! the intensity of the words you used was unbelieveable.....it sounds so real and fantastic.....excellent job!

Superior character and plot development. Seduction via blackmail an intriguing twist. Excellent love scenes. Welcome back to the Lit. site. Hope you have more stories like this on tap.

The most amazingly erotic story I have read... I was hooked from beginning to end by a truelly wonderful and sexy plot.

Supurb text and riviting plot / story line. You really seem to know your way around a girl's body! Interesting mix of fear and sexuality, many say the two are closely related in some people's deepest fantasies. You have an artist's gift and I hope to read more stories from you....

Wow absolutely amazing, am a very big fan of yours miranda love all your stories and just wish that one day you get awarded for all your hard work. A must read Story.

your biggest fan

sole

(lol yep its me from the room)

Yes S & C it was very well written so erotic and intense yet enticing an intriguing desire. Glad this story was suggested by someone dear to you and keep writing.

This story had me transfixed from start to finish with its twisting plot building beautifully. The minute attention to detail adds to the reality resulting in a very sensual read. Left me breathless... Rachel.x

Miranda! I cannot believe I put off reading this story for so long. So glad that I finally got around to it. As with the other stories I've read of yours, this was simply fantastic. I can't wait to read those stories that you still need to finish up. In the meantime, I will read the rest of your submissions. *grins* guess who! *winks*

Great story Miranda. Loved every second of it.

-Mei

What should be noticed about this story in comparison with Miranda's other works is the infinitely superior use of language; a far better standard of English. Perhaps Miranda would like to comment on the obvious discrepancy between this and her other work?

This story was written by myself. However a friend assisted me with its editing for which I am truly grateful..

Pity her life changes took her away from Lit.

Miranda

Thats a incredible story, well written and so hot!

I wasn't comfortable with the word 'fanny'. It has fallen into disuse in England and in the US it means the bottom or backside. 'Pussy' would be a better term to use as it removes ambiguity and, dare I say, a certain coarseness associated with 'fanny'.

Otherwise, a very well-written piece. Held my attention to the end. Thank you.

A well written story and one I like to read again & again.

so wet so nice

Your usage of all those emotions and anxieties made this the most satisfying story of non-con. I am still feeling it deep inside, still feel many different feeelings on the surface. But it was gratifying to see it end that way.

Your story was an incredible journey. Julie and Miranda 'came to life' in MIRANDA'S DESIRE. This is the first story I read of yours, and was disappointed you haven't submitted any stories recently. Please continue writing.

I found myself unable to stop reading until i felt like i was in the room living/being part of the story

It looks as if you worked with an editor for this story. Punctuation much better, making the story clearer, fewer spelling errors. You've matched the concept to the content.