All Comments on 'Mischief in the Office'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

Good premise.

Overly rushed.

No foreplay.

No teasing -- of him or of her.

Boom! Cock in mouth. Orgasm.

Boom! Mouth on pussy. Orgasm.

Lacks Tags.

Three stars.

memorex3669memorex3669about 2 months ago

I am always amazed that the critical people are Anonymous. Own you comments or crawl back in your hole.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

I loved it! Fun, naughty, and well written. Thanks!

AnonymousAnonymous22 days ago

Fun story! Thank you for writing it and sharing it.

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