by Jackson Blacke
keep writing this what you call shit. It isn't Shakespere, but it isn't shit either. A great read, nicely written and H-O-T.
I was elated to see a new story from you, and what an epic tale! Great job and please keep writing. Love your style :)
Really enjoyed it.I'm glad you're going futher whith the story,hope to read more soon.
Yo that rap battling part was kinda lacking, basic syllable rhyming. Step those bars up.