All Comments on 'Miss Jacquline's Challenge'

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AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Interesting premise.

But sex lacks needed details.

Three stars.

mrwidehorizonsmrwidehorizons5 months ago

Nice loving tale with some great teasing. Great job!

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Just love it !!

neatwaitneatwait5 months agoAuthor

thank you all for the comments! I am hoping to fine tune the story and maybe one day have a VA record it!

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Gorgeous story! Can't wait for more!

neatwaitneatwait5 months agoAuthor

thank you. i really appreciate it.

DerekWoodsDerekWoodsabout 2 months ago

Great tale. I love the thoughtful eroticism here. More please!

Movinon2Movinon2about 1 month ago

What a sensual story! This so very closely resembles what my wife and I have. Her tenderness in leading me from the buildup to my release after days of teasing is such a wonderful feeling. Thank you for a great story .

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