by andreinamsterdam
Hope you continue with this story soon... enjoyed it.
...and better. Looking forward to the next chapters. Thanks for writing. I expect you'll get some "hate" and s..t from others. Ignore it.
Very well done! Love the submission by Michael and his humiliation! Well thought out and delivered. Hope you continue the series. Susan
But so well done! I guess this is best described as a cautionary tale... be very careful what you wish for. Your score will be on the low side because the voters are for the most part like Michael! CFNM is for their enjoyment and little attention is given to the females' motivation. But, really, very well done!
IDC what anyone else says, amazing story. There's nothing like the female dom requiring the deflowering of the male. Love forced gay stories! Very well written, wonderful pace!
I like how you built up to this, and her riding the "gay" friend to orgasm was a very erotic scene.
I appreciate the assertion of Miss Katherine's will. There is a clear path to what happened and it was well executed and told. I look forward to the next installment.
Such a great, well plotted story! The blossoming of a reluctant dom, inspired. Every story has two plots: the one we imagine as we read and the one the author gives us! Yours was perfect as is. One complaint, you left us hanging with the hint of an evening with the girls. Pity you didn't follow through.