All Comments on 'Miss Longcross Pt. 01'

More please

That doesn't belong here and was rather incomplete anyway.

Not a bad start, somewhat cliched, but hey!

I still enjoyed the story

Scores 4/5

Well done, and quite the reminiscent read for me.

5/5. Loved it. Cant wait to read the next part.

Would have liked more detail on Janice and Susan's encounter though I suspect there's more to come. Can't wait for part 2

Don’t stop now. Hopefully part II is imminent. Thanks

5*

Tc

Outstanding beginning to what I hope turns into a series of stories...............():\