All Comments on 'Mister Gabe Ch. 03'

Alexander Pope once described an adversary as "This painted child of dirt that stinks and stings". Your story brings this to mind. Get yourself seen to, son, before you breed.

The fuck is wrong with you?

This seems written in an asylum by a demented Nazi...1*

What were you on when you wrote this garbage?! You're batshit crazy! So fuckin sorry I wasted my time. When is lit going to raise its standards?

Ditto to the last three comments

Funny thing is, I don't even need to read the first paragraph to know what a waste of time it would have been. But thanks for the effort, chump.

At times that's the only thing, that they have going for them,but facts be know, black and Spanish woman rather be with an educated white man, then uneducated black or Spanish man, if I was dave, I would have explained, it then just capped him, but I am a Marine, three clicks to the right , set elevation , checked windage, range is clear fire at will, bye bye mule....

you dumbass. Just set the function to fully automatic and let it rip you a new one. gave it a 5

Diarrhea of the mouth. Barking at the moon.Lastly and most importantly ranting and raving at someone calley annony.You sad excuse for a human being .Glad you gave this story a 5 .Got the score up to 1.2.This should not be posted here or anywhere for that matter.Then again bonnie maybe you and this author could hook up.Two lunatics

I'm not like you dick head who hides behind your annnony. You are a coward and a fraud and a asshole. I gave this story another 5 because I had to come back to tell dear annony what I think. So fuck you in the heart asshole annoy!!

You're a man! Masquerading as a woman. That's okay. We dislike you and this story anyway.

Mister Gabe needs taking to west By God Va and shown what a proper BBQ is. He thinks he is tough shit. We would take his drink and use it to flavor ours. By the time we got through with his sorry ass. He would be the first black man to whistle dixie and swear he would lead the first charge. But first he like all good swine that makes great BBQ, must be nutted. Now the way we do it here is. We lay the swine down. tie it's front legs together. Have someone pull the front legs back. Have some one spread and then stand on the hind legs. Reach in and cut the bag and squeeze. Then slap on a good ole coating of sheep dip and Tar so it can heal. Now you have the makings of another BBQ dinner in the woods soon.Oh and Mr gabe would really no longer have an interest in anything but eating his daily porridge

only a 2, story is still strange. I keep wondering when David will be able to set thing right again--payback can be very rewarding especially when Mr. Gabe gets his.

I have to admit I like the IR cuckold stories. I do like to think of them as actually happening which this one has gone way out of bounds. I still like the story and would give it a very high rating, but when you drove the nail through the tit you really kinda killed it. Talk about a buzz kill. I will continue to read though unless it gets to crazy. Which it is already pretty far gone but I still like it.

So what does Dave do with his tortured and multilated wife? In a more real wold situation Gabe might cut off her breasts or maybe her head. How does Dave rescue his family before this black Josef Mengele character further warps their sanity or butchers them? What does David do about MG, his boss? Obviously, MG is complicit in Gabe's scheme. Perhaps David makes good on the death threat? Certainly, David has cause.

As vile as this story is I'd like to see how the author brings this offensive storyline to an end.

I give you a 5 to finish.

Reading about torture is not erotic. This should be in the extreme category. Oh yea, Literotica did away with that category many years ago. This will be reported.

I was enjoying this, it is over-the-top and different, but the violence in chapter 9 is unnecessary.

In view of the pathetic scores this bunch of crap is getting, why are you still inflicting it on people. Just the ramblings of a sick twisted mind.

IM GLAD i didnt read this from the beginning. hope the writer is just playing out a fantasy

Only homosexuals in denial get off on punching women. That explains the author's delight in describing men sucking dicks and licking lips. Obviously the author is a repressed homosexual himself.

that you had to delete the scene of nailing Jen's nipples to the board. That was a very erotic S&M scene. Well at least I know what went there. Started reading back through. Now on to Ch. 04!

Physical violence against women is never erotic.

The author is probably a repressed homosexual and living in denial has warped his mind. That would also explain his obsession with dicks.