All Comments on 'Mister X'

4 stars. Would have been 5 plus if you didn't end it.

It would have been great to have a part 2 of kitty Kate's life on the island building up to Jane's retirement. Thanks for writing.

The great start was overshadowed by becoming very cult like.

Temporary Position or a Life Style

Does art approximate life or does life become art? That's the choice faced by Katherine Svensen, who goes into porn to continue her education. It's an interesting concept.

Really an awesome read but it ended way too soon. You could have had a great long story that keeps going on and on. There was so much to cover that just got blown off. It was like you had this great idea and started writing this impressive story and then you became bored with it and shut it down with a few sentences. What a waste.

@anonymous - I actually did have three ideas for other stories that were better and ended this rather suddenly. I may remove the final bit and add much more to this later, if I finish or get bored with the 30+ other stories I currently have in progress.