All Comments on 'Mistress in the Making Ch. 01'

More. This is great

Write on. After Layla, it will be Mom.

Ohhh so arousing that she is given her best friend as her sex slave for a birthday present! THAT is HOT!

Great! More Please!!!

Another brilliant and very erotic piece. And as usual you leave us hanging and wanting more. No needing more. I don't which series you continue next, just please release moe chapters asap

Anonymous wrote: "Another brilliant and very erotic piece. And as usual you leave us hanging and wanting more. No needing more...."

Thank you! I'm so glad you like my stories! I wish I could get around to finishing the the Mistress in the Making story. I'm very happy with Chapter One -- so much so that it's a bit daunting to try to write a Chapter Two that lives up to the same standard (I've tried). It's my favorite story out of everything I've written. Sometimes these stories practically write themselves if I come up with a good idea, but it's almost impossible to force it. I hope Chapter One reached enough of a stopping point that it was worth reading without complete frustration over the cliffhanger ending.

But I haven't given up on it yet. I have a lot of other material that's 90% complete that I want to finish first, so we'll see. FYI I included the "can't compete" line in my introductions early on, but I mostly removed it as I gained confidence. I revised most of my stories over the past year and I think they're better now than they were. But silkstockingslover is still my idol!