All Comments on 'Mistress Joan'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Who is Tammy? How could Tonya see his muscles through the blindfold? A proofreader might be a handy thing...

ShadowRosieShadowRosieover 2 years ago

The story was very draggy and seemed to avoid excitement except the last few paragraphs.

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