by ThoughtStorm
This story is extremely compelling. It could definitily be transformed into a cinematic wonder. NC-17, of course. You'd probably have to take out too much content to bring it down to "R" but definitely compelling. Maybe you should think of submitting it to some Hollywood screenwriter for review. It would certainly be interesting, and it could very well become a blockbuster hit. Just a thought. In the mean time, I'll be eagerly awaiting Chapter 7...