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by Toby_dog

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
best story ever

youre a perfect writer! cant wait for the next chapter!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

yes another chapter

RoAcHariusRoAcHariusover 4 years ago
Good!

Nicely done! I would say though I think you mean ‘device’ rather than ‘devise’. Your spellcheck won’t pick it up because they are both words but they have very different meanings! Otherwise well written, looking forward to the next chapter!

SecondlearningSecondlearningover 4 years ago
More please!

What exciting adventures are in store for Eden?

4Leather4Leather8 months ago

Have me hooked want to see what happens to Eden next.

Next chapter please.

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70 y/o male, married to the same woman for 50 years. Have lived in Fl, IL, AR, NY, AL. In foreign countries of Vietnam and Japan. Proud father, grandfather and great grandfather. Love this country and will fight still today to keep it free.

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