All Comments on 'Mistress of the Game'

This is a SICK story that is depicting white TRASH.

Laura & Lisa, bi sisters, NO VOTE

This is a SICK story that is depicting white TRASH.

If one read a single paragrah at random, the writig might be considered above averag for the site; some paragraphs are even good. Taken as a whole, however, the narrative repeatedly fails to deliver its potential.

Characters are introduced to no purpose. Thre are a series of individual scenes but no real theme development. On the wole I hate stories like this more than those which are just badly written from the first sentance - at least these can be discarded without further reading. This just keeps promising a little and not delivering.

Well worth missing out.