All Comments on 'Misty Breaks Ch. 02 - The Long Slide'

What is the name of the 1st chapter for this story?

Nope.

I have no words for your story I love it, thank you very much for adding the son in the 3rd part, could you add that they do not go where Aunt Patty comes, if not that Aunt Patty comes where they could add that Aunt Patty has operated breasts and that they are giants I would appreciate it very much thank you very much I love you are a great writer with a brilliant mind

I have no words for your story I love it, thank you very much for adding the son in the 3rd part, could you add that they do not go where Aunt Patty comes, if not that Aunt Patty comes where they could add that Aunt Patty has operated breasts and that they are giants I would appreciate it very much thank you very much I love you are a great writer with a brilliant mind

hello what a great story but you could add a gangbang of young black men and that aunt patty participate in it you could make aunt patty younger and much more voluptuous than her sister thank you what a good writer you are

Yes, where is chapter1??

"Please read the first chapter of this series "

What first chapter?

I have the same question. 1st chapter?

Love the story. Putting the white bitch in her place. On her knees servicing a big black cock,

Literotica pulled my first chapter retroactively for a violation of their guidelines. I re-wrote large parts of it and resubmitted it. Hopefully I have fulfilled their regulations and the story will be up again soon. Thanks for your patience. ~B

read Chapter 1 when I can't even find it?

I liked the story, even though I did not see Ch.1 previously. Seems DeShawn was too easily allowed to be in the house but he is a thug. What was a missed oppurtunity for the writer was all the action Misty had after James gave her the "white Powder". The friend, DeShawn,the two strippers could have all been elaborated on for a much more explicit delving into what she was part of. Can't wait to see next chapter and hope DeShawn pimps her while David is at school. Maybe have her dance at James bar

David really needs to make a break for it and leave home.

Stereotypical ,call woman slut brother takes her to the hood to shitty bar and let other brothers fuck her

Incredible story, very good friend, I already read 1 part 2 part and I look forward to 3 in 3, you could add aunt Patty and that aunt has a child

A great story! Luved the slow built up in the beginning as Misty tries to resist but can't. Also, the slow but steady and growing submissiveness of Misty. What will happen next- Misty becomes a dancer (with all stripper enhancements?) for James? or does Misty become a slut (with all of the body changes for her?) for DeWayne when all alone in the Summer? plse plse continue!