All Comments on 'Mixing Business with Pleasure'

Good premise.

But really lacking in details. Just saying the equivalent of "I reached for her tits and played with them" really isn't erotic. How did he touch them? Softly? Hard? Did he play with her nipples? Hoe did that feel to him? To her? Did she tell him to play more? Did she ask him if he liked them? Sid she tell him to flick her nipples? Squeeze them? Kiss them? Suck them? Did she ask him if he could imagine what it'd feel like if she wrapped them around his tits and they titty fucked? If not, why not?

Etc.

Three stars.

Too many "Fucks" and not enough detail. Cori was written with too much crudeness.

Thank you, I appreciate your input! I will remember that for my next one.😁

@KarenCDFL, where are your stories?

Not Hard, and fast for a demanding Bitch. Just the way it should be. More please.

@Crusader235 Part 2 is being edited. Will post soon. Thank you

Fucking OUTSTANDING!

@Strangelove2551 thank you so much!