All Comments on 'Model Behavoir'

This is so stupid it isn't the least bit erotic, even if you work at McDonalds!

I work at McDonalds and I thought it was erotic

but they make for a very childish story. There is no depth, no stimulation, no understanding of what good story telling is all about.

Sorry, just not a good read. Unreal.

You are a dumb fuck. That is why you work at McDonalds.

why is it that every white man or white woman think that we want white women to be our sluts.then the kicker is we want to share our woman.that is crazy,we don't share our women.the sick minds of white people and their sins of the past make them act our their short coming.i would have been kicking ass right now and pam shop i would own.the wife would be on her own as well.have a whore slut around my kids writer don't or want use common sense when they write these crappy stories.all you did was make the hubby look and act like a white fool.

first off when i seem my wife come in i would have headed them off ...ripped her piece of shit dress off her and if pam said anything i would have smeared her nose all over her face as i would with the mike guy if he said anything either...i would have then took pams pocket book and wrote out a check for her modeling and then dfamages and she had better sign it ..other wise id own her business ..id have taken her keys and if she gave me nayshit id still have taken them and went back and gotten my wifes shit just before i dropped the match that let the whole place go up in smoke...then my wife would havehad some fun explaining what happened and how she ended up coming into a black bar with a fucking lesbian and a black dog...this story is demeaning t othe white race and if this is how a black man feels about us ...maybe we just need to pick up our guns and help send them all to hell...if the majority dont feel as if this stroy is a true representation of how the majority think ...id suggest you educate them before some wise ass black fucking nigger ends up pissing off a whole bunch of white guys like me who are really pissed aat the conciet that most blacks show and i stock up more ammunition y=than i already have...blacks sqay they want to get rid of racism and then expect white men to read shit like this and not feel like shoving a gun up their ass and pull the trigger...id love to have the black asshole who wrote this where i could tell him exactly what i think of his NIGGER assif i could give negative votes id do it ...you racial asshole

This wimp husband story, about a man with no backbone or a shred of manhood is incredibly bad. The "writer" has absolutely NO imagination, ability, or skill at developing a plausible story line or in making even an implausible one work on any level. In short, this story sucks big time. I suggest the "writer" never submit another text to this website.

The author is a good writer but the subject matter, while fantasy, can have quite a strong impact: this whether the men at the club are oriental black and/or white. It's the husband who is used as well as his wife. The author has the freedom to write what he/she wishes, and, again, there is no problem with the writers technical ability to compose stories. As the situation described is highly unlikely to ever occur, except if drugs had been used on Tracy, the author should be urged to continue this story directing it in a realistic direction. There are other "wimp" stories in the category of "Loving Wives". But unlike this story, their authors usually lack writing skills and their stories are very boring to read; they leave little to no impact. Contrariwise, the present author writes well. He/she must redirect this story to include Payback from Tracy and Her Loving Husband upon that group at the club plus Pam! There is no middle ground. RAG

The author is a good writer but the subject matter, while fantasy, can have quite a strong impact: this whether the men at the club are oriental black and/or white. It's the husband who is used as well as his wife. The author has the freedom to write what he/she wishes, and, again, there is no problem with the writers technical ability to compose stories. As the situation described is highly unlikely to ever occur, except if drugs had been used on Tracy, the author should be urged to continue this story directing it in a realistic direction. There are other "wimp" stories in the category of "Loving Wives". But unlike this story, their authors usually lack writing skills and their stories are very boring to read; they leave little to no impact. Contrariwise, the present author writes well. He/she must redirect this story to include Payback from Tracy and Her Loving Husband upon that group at the club plus Pam! There is no middle ground. RAG

I have enjoyed several of this writer's stories and started off enjoying this one. It seemed like it was building up to a nice erotic scenario but, suddenly the scene changed and it was like wham, bam, thank you ma'am. A wife who was uncomfortable enough about going to a private photo shoot that she brought her husband with her is suddenly transformed into a complete slut who gets naked and gang banged in a public club at the drop of a hat. It was like two different stories were hacked together or else the entire middle of this story was left out. Now, I enjoy a wife turns slut story as well as the next horny bastard but, I prefer to see some reasonable progression to that point.

The writers fetish is to humiliate himself and men like him - you know the sick ones who have no self respect - who want to feel pathetic helpless humiliation to the nth degree from a disrespectful whoreish spouse.<P>

The writer has a repugnant sick predilection for male humiliation to the extreme. He likes the others cock cum from her swollen cunt. He lives for stringy curdled cum from her enlarged cunt. He wants people not to like him or respect him as it satisfys his need for pitiful disrespect.<P>

He is a sick puppie - just the way he wants to be. The danger is when he becomes so jaded - so numb from this that he needs more - deeper - freakier subhuman scum to get excited - then its sex offender list time. His ride is down and the only question is when and how far until he cracks into the worst possible.<P>

Write on little sick one for the very few like yourself who require the deep sick fetish of being the worst human possible just to get it up. How sad - in time.

want to even live. Some people are just to stupid to be allowed outside of controlled homes.

the big White man giggled like a li'le white girl from behind the crowds of brothers/masters, when the beloved wife was out of breathes from being pummeled for a few hours. <p>

"Honey, you looke wonderful. We've done it again tonight, honey. The kids' be so proud of their loving mother, all saturated with love cream with their father lovingingly licked away right after the masters left. Spit, semen, sweat, both of us are so brave; we lick them all dry, honey. I'm so proud of you!" <p>

and he giggled again, before zippin' his pants.

I’m a McDonalds burger-flipper, and this is as hot as the grill I labor over!!! The writing is great, and the sex is lava hot!!!

I want more!!!!!

Just to over the top. Sorry, you missed by a mile on this one. It started off good and showed promise, but you blew it (no pun intended) when they met at that club to fuck. Just to unbelieveable and down right DUMB!

Loved it!

I missed the dialog between the husband and wife after her initiation, but a very erotic story was told. Thank you.

Impossibly unbeleivable.

...another XXXcellent installation of BLACK POWER over WHITEYs WOMEN...who PREFER the MASSIVE BLACK STALLION MEAT over witey!!!...she is now 'OWNED' by BLACK, inc....and is a BREEDER VESSEL for all the BLACK CLUBBIN' BROTHERS...of which HUBBY can never touch her again...and must SERVE HER AND HER BLACK MASTERS...whitey loses again!!!...a NATURAL PHENOMENA occurring in america...YOU GO GIRL!!!...XXXXXXXXXXOXOXOXOXO..........;)))

Come on....was she drugged, ecstacy, tranquilizers...what?

How do you go from a conservative, prudish housewife and mother to a slut and an exhibitionist? And...now they are into it for the Tuesday session, come on, explain some drugs, hypnosis or some kind of blackmail, these are educated people, not low morale losers all of a sudden!

Some of your stuff was good but you just lost any respect I ever had for you, those black assholes should be dead and bleeding, I mean really go to dark wanderer if you want to write trash like this. Black masters my ass , dead fuckers is more like it. HOW CAN YOU EVEN PUT YOUR NAME TO SUCH TRIPE.

I enjoyed this hot story of this married couple on a new sexual journey. A continuation with the husband and wife coming to terms with their new situation would be interesting.

Fuck you black masters I would kill pam mike and the slut wife before I WOULD BRING HER BACK TO MIKE. FUCK YOU ,YOU PEICE OF DOG SHIT ,YOU SUCK ASS MOTHER FUCKER,EAT SHIT AND DIE FUCK YOU.........................................................................................................

Grow a back bone

We need more episodes!!43C7

Racist propaganda garbage. Thanks for adding to the hate, asshole.

Pitiful 1 star

Without the last line the marriage had a chance. Sadly it's over, I don't enjoy stories with sad endings

Bullshit

Nope, Pam did hate him like he thought. She successfully destroyed his marriage by giving her some date rape drugs and getting her Black Bred pulling a Train for all the Blacks in Town. Oh, I'd be back on time. With my .45 and a dozen loaded mags to shoot all those fuckers. Most especially Mike and Pam. Do you think his wife could ever be satisfied by hubby again? Doubtful. She is ruined forever. Sad Story. Wife was so Conservative before now she will always be a whore.

More Likely Pam slipped the wife some Exstacy. It has been a long time since I did that drug. With that she definitly would let them get her naked and fuck them all.