by Charles Petersunn
reads like a "brief" history of men's underwear. Now, of course, you are going to have to write a companion piece for women's undergarments. I'm glad you liked my idea, it takes a lot of patience to develop a story to this extent!
Damn this was a hot read. can't believe it took me this long to find you!!!
Im wondering when we get to experience Pamela and all her sexual experience.
This story begs for a follow up story. Please give some thought.
This story is incredably erotic in and by itself. I was on the edge of anticipation through every paragraph. I will now go to chapter one and begin the whole series. However, if each chapter is like this one, I will put at least a week between each one, to prevent a stroke or heart attack.
I think this is one of the best chapters in an excellent series, but there are plenty of scope for a sequel, do have any plans for this?
Great story with excellent attention to detail. I'd love a sequel.
Dear Charles,
this was such an amazing read! I guess You put a whole lot of time even into researching the history of underwear. You really write professionally. Such a clear language, such a wonderful developed storyline. Putting a lot of hesitation into the characters only builds up to a really good peripety. Just my kind of read!
Keep it up!
However in the beginning I didn't really like all the referencing to the other stories... it detracts from THIS story.
But after that it quickly became worthwhile.
Erotic, funny, and fantastic writing. Not only that.....you are a mine of information.
What a great sensual exotic story!
Wonderful story and series. My only complaint stems from a pet peeve of mine. The difference between taught and taut. Might be worth looking up, as the incorrect word was used more than once in this story. Otherwise, I absolutely loved it.
Nice story and classroom participation. Ms. Buxly knows how to handle - - - a classroom discussion, making sure no girl dominates the subject.
Sulcus- I looked it up a groove or furrow of the brain, certainly all eyes and thought were on his head.
I like the stories as a series of overlaped characters or intertwined stories, nicly done. There is so many good stories here, a bit overwhelming. Stories barely readable to complex series, and very well read. How much fun is this allowed.
A good, healthy laugh can sometimes do more for one than an orgasm.
Just the image of a Shrinking Violet holding on for dear life to a Raging Johnson is one of the best pictures I have ever seen anywhere in Literotica. I'm serious. And, hey, let's not forget Miss Bixley's quick save followed by Ashley's "Next time I get the extra credit." Beautiful.
I was looking for stories about Life Models for Art Classes with a Mature/Young Man [incest is fine too] focus when I came across this story. Now I am going to have to try the rest of them. I hope Miss Bixley and Daniel will be able to indulge in a sharing relationship. {BTW: If the class does have another session with Daniel [I can picture them all wearing a bit of lip gloss and eyeshadow, maybe a couple of buttons opened on their blouses, no bras so you can see their nipples thru their white blouses, non-standard white blouses that are a bit on the sheer side] I hope MIss Bixley will use the opportunity to demonstrate the more creative side of undergarment design using Novelty underwear (where the sole use of fabric is for an elephant's trunk, a rhino's horn, a cobra's hood, and Long John Silver's silver dong [we can't ignore classic literature, now can we?]). And, since it is important to think globally, we can expect an examination of how Brazilian designers tackled the problem of Carnival Kings and Queens meeting the need for minimal cover-up using the "tapa sexo (-feminino and -masculino)" as they strut their stuff atop their floats in the Sambadrome.}
I think one way you can judge a story is by what you take away from it and use in your life outside of Literotica. I can't wait to see what my wife will say when I ask her "Hey, Honey, want some 'extra-credit'?"
Again, thanks for sharing your creative efforts with us!
as a read this story my penis got so hard and in the end I splattered all my jism into my coffee and drank it all down. I sure wish I had someone who I could jerk off to see how their cream tastes compared to mine.
I didn't know you kept writing chapters of this story (The lessons). What a great news! Thank you so much.
Would have loved to be the model in something like that when I was in school.
Oh, well . . . I did walk naked along a river, but 2 miles north on the bank, and back 2 miles south, and Nobody came by. Boring.
Your story is not only up to par it is above and beyond expectations. I am absolutely crazy about cfnm/enm stories just like this one. I so hope that you will continue writing tales about bashful well-hung men baring it all in front of a group of gorgeous girls.