All Comments on 'Mollified Magic Ch. 08'

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Keep up the great work! Looking forward to more!

Amazing work! Keep going a sexy cliffhanger and plant of Halloween..

And is Tom an unknown wizard of sorts??

Looking forward to the next chapter. 5 stars

Everything is believable (Lol) in this excellent story except your claim about it being your first attempt at creative writing. It seems that truth is hidden in open sight too, But that’s fine, we’re under your spell. Thank you for sharing your gift.

Anonymous: Thank you for such high praise, but this IS my first attempt at creative writing. I have written a lot of professional reports and LTE's to the local papers. I give a lot of credit to Chris6061 for his excellent editing skills. I have learned a lot from him. I also read a lot, and that has given me ideas about story development. I'm glad you're enjoying the story, I've had a blast writing it. Much more to come.

You’re welcome EverydayMagic. The praise is well deserved. You are twice fortunate in having natural talent and a great editor/advisor. I hope that you will continue to enjoy writing in whatever genres that may attract your interest and enthusiasm.

These sisters are so intriguing , sexy , and fun . GR8 job .

Excellent story. I am really enjoying it.

Great chapter enjoyed it a lot.

Also as someone from Boston who grew up next to Salem, you've either spent time there yourself, or done some good research :) Very authentic!