All Comments on 'Mollified Magic Ch. 24'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Great story, satisfying ending.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Sad to see this story come to an end. Morina and the switching spell origin could be good. Maybe even a story about Tom's mother? I imagine she protected him until the end. She may have hoped to be a good influence on him so that he wouldn't become another Blaze. But that influence would have been short lived. Maybe a year at most? I forget how much older Blaze said Tom was than he believed.

Maybe he still has some sort of memory block spell cast by Blaze? It could break or time-out and he regains memories about his life and his mother during their brief time together. That restoration of memory could trigger another spell to be unlocked. Say his mom pulled a Spock before she was killed and gave him all her memories and spells. But she protected them so they wouldn't be known until Tom was ready for them or needed to know. A bit or all of her spirit or power bound into the spell. That might explain Tom having 6 inch horns to start with. Maybe it ensured his and Molly's twinning would happen? Her gift to both Tom and Molly? Blaze may have never suspected so he didn't eliminate such a memory spell. It could even have a message for her sister or a separate spell message for her? That's the most way I could think of to give his mother life. A flashback sort of tale that would have all us readers grieving her passing by the end. I know, not a very sexual story idea but she could have been a freak in the sheets back in the day. lol

Morgana only got a partial happy ending. Saved from Blaze but has to go on without her love. Maybe a new love will find her in another story? Or she and Molly share Tom?

Umm, speaking of Tom, how long are his horns now.? He started with 6 inch, had 11 inch at his peak but now is somewhere in between. Was it three additional for being on the council and two extra for being the chairman? That would mean he still has 9 inch horns. Or 8 inch if I flipped those numbers. Still puts his equal to or one more inch than Connor. Hornier than the wizard of lust? LOL It's been a cool story and I hope you are back soon with more cool stories.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

I wasn't expecting it to end so soon, but it was a good story while it lasted regardless. Thanks for writing it.

Jonathan680Jonathan680about 1 year ago

Loved it from Start to finish

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Loved the series! Great job. So sad that it has ended.

MormonJackMormonJackabout 1 year ago

Enjoyed the tale/journey! Thank you!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Really liked the series.

Really liked the ending.

(Only negative is that I would not have ended it with session of anal sex. Would have been good to see something magical and new for final sex encounter.)

Looking forward to the next one.

EverydayMagicEverydayMagicabout 1 year agoAuthor

Thank you for you comments and suggestions. I'm especially thankful for your generous ratings.

This was a fun story to write, although I'm convinced that good stories tend to write themselves with some authors being lucky enough to sit behind the keyboard when that happens. That's where the real magic happens.

I'm working on a piece about pixies now and plan to return to a prequel to Mollified Magic later. Spin-offs are possible.

pkp033pkp033about 1 year ago

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Very hot and enjoyable series, looking fwd to whatever you cook up (or should I say brew) next!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Loved the story. Honestly, I could handle an epilogue, maybe some nice relaxed fun with Molly and Morgana. Bit of a happily ever after.

OmniConOmniConabout 1 year ago

I loved this story! I was always looking forward to the next chepter. I'm a little bit sad, that it ended, but it's a fine end!

No1holywoodNo1holywoodabout 1 year ago

It would be nice to have a ten years later story to see how witches and warlocks started working together and convert the bad warlock families to good. Also see how Tom and Mollie get on and have a family themselves

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Great pacing, ending didn't feel rushed like other series

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Not much to say. Fucking Awesome!

Nakana007Nakana007about 1 year ago

I absolutely blessed through this (pun intended) entire story in just inner 48 hours! Your story telling and character development throughout was fantastic!

Dreamdog519Dreamdog519about 1 year ago

Excellent story, I hope you write more in the future.

pk2curiouspk2curiousabout 1 year ago

I finally caught up . This was one of the most enjoyable stories I have read . Held my attention and had some GR8 sex scenes . Well writen .

Thank you .

nivvilnivvilabout 1 year ago

A next chapter of this timeline would be great. Maybe after some years, when things have settled and a new baddie raises it's ungly head? Or a "simple" continuation where curious spooks and insurance agents are making trouble, ocastrated by THEM (insert here the Illuminati, Cult of Cthullhu, the Atlenteans or maybe Aliens).

JSA69JSA6912 months ago

Sweet ending. I have enjoyed every chapter of this story. Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

My 2 cents

10 stars!!

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

I know that all good things must come to an end, but I'd love for this wonderful tale to continue. Thank you for a fabulous bit of entertainment.

budson1budson18 months ago

Loved it look forward to more of your stories

sirwoodcuttersirwoodcutter3 months ago

I have read this full series over the last few days. Fully enjoyed it.

ClearmuseClearmuse24 days ago

Great story, binged it hard. 5 stars all around. I'm sure I'll get to your other works soon!

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