by away443
Loved your first sentence. Sweet build up w/ all the awkward bits, nice descriptions.
Just to be clear, you're saying making the abusive husband the bad guy was dumb? God bless you.
Very well written and erotic. I especially liked the suspenseful build up.
This was excellent. Well paced, well described. Mary Kate was appropriately ambivalent but curious, the stranger was a genuine cad, the husband was forgettable. Very good work.