All Comments on 'Molly Kate's Handjob Misfire'

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slogunnslogunnabout 7 years ago
very hot!

This was a pretty hot story. good work

yowseryowserabout 7 years ago
Church, adultery, handjob - Hat trick

Loved your first sentence. Sweet build up w/ all the awkward bits, nice descriptions.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

Once you get a woman hot she is all yours. Great story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Honestly making the husband the bad guy was dumb.

away443away443over 3 years agoAuthor

Just to be clear, you're saying making the abusive husband the bad guy was dumb? God bless you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Meant to give it 5 stars, sorry

Very well written and erotic. I especially liked the suspenseful build up.

FullMetalJackalFullMetalJackalover 1 year ago

This was excellent. Well paced, well described. Mary Kate was appropriately ambivalent but curious, the stranger was a genuine cad, the husband was forgettable. Very good work.

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"What the fuck did I just read?" is the best compliment I could get. At the last count, 1.1 million reads of my perverted stories, and at a conservative ratio, I claim at least a quarter million masturbators to my works.