by away443
This was excellent. Well paced, well described. Mary Kate was appropriately ambivalent but curious, the stranger was a genuine cad, the husband was forgettable. Very good work.
Very well written and erotic. I especially liked the suspenseful build up.
Just to be clear, you're saying making the abusive husband the bad guy was dumb? God bless you.
Loved your first sentence. Sweet build up w/ all the awkward bits, nice descriptions.