by OpulentSloth
didn't care for the story, but your handle is great. OpulentSloth...love it.
Aha, hide a LW story back in the Incest area. If you had Mark die, leave, or just move on the story would be ok, but keeping him there in persion makes the story suck.
Why didn't her son plant Ann a grandchild in Ann's own womb as well as his sister's? All this while Mark watched. That would be HOT! A good story but you could've stretched it out & added chapters. 4β
Half decent idea, very badly written. Spelling and grammar are all over the place. Delete this and re-post once it's sorted.
Mark is a wasted 'character' the kids aren't really described or the mother for that matter.
A really idiotic story. In reality, the father films the adultery/incest and goes to the lawyer.
In the divorce he gets everything and the slut gets nothing. If she protest, the video mysteriously uploads to the Internet and many people get a clue as to where it can be seen. When the divorce is finalized he sends the video to her family friends and colleagues and that's it for the kids and the slut!