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It was late at night when we drove back, Mom and I, across the empty wooded streets and back to the suburbs. I'd been feeling sore after Nicole's attentions. Mom looked ruffled but glowing.
"Sorry for pulling your leg," I told Mom, as we took a turn up the road and the city lights came into view "I hope I didn't make it weird."
Mom didn't say anything, only placed her hand on my thigh. It lingered there for a while, going up a little bit higher than it should, even when she could tell that my cock started to swell under her touch.
I smiled. This was shaping up to be one hell of a summer.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousabout 2 years agoReally enjoyed this first chapter. Mom is too heartless but everything else was quite enjoyable. Shame the next chapter ruins it.
OverconfidentSarcasmabout 2 years agoYeah, sorry, but I couldn't finish this.
Seriously... all I could think about was the role reversal: Imagine a Father, asking his 18yo daughter to give up her virginity to his 50+ boss, so the Father would have a shot at a promotion. Everybody would lose their shit. But with an 18yo virgin BOY, well... THAT'S totally OK!
Anonymousabout 2 years agoMixed feelings on this one, and I felt part of the problem was that it moved too quickly. I had no idea what any of these characters looked like, as descriptions were very light and sparse. The narrator was also a bit lacking in the thoughts and feelings department such that I didn’t get much from him in the form of desire or arousal or even goals within the story.
The most interesting part stemmed from the chat with his dad about being avoidant and resistant out of fear — which I liked — but this thread never seemed to come back, and we never really get much personality from the narrator in terms of him actually feeling torn about being attracted to his friend, mom, or mom’s boss. Like, the moments with Dee (shaving, blowjob, video call masturbation) felt like they were just inconsequentially happening without any insight about the narrator’s excitement. Something to the effect of “as her lips wrapped around me, I found myself wondering why I waited so long to do this with her.”
These moments all felt really inconsequential and devoid of conflict/triumph. That being said, the actual writing style wasn’t bad and the scenario was kind of interesting.
I think you have the framing of a solid story, but it feels like it needs to slow down, depict the characters’ with a bit more visualization, and convey some more personality with your narrator.
UAlbanyGirl518about 2 years agoGood story, even if a little light on the incest theme. A lot of spelling and wrong words (ie count instead of cunt) we’re distracting. But if there is a follow up chapter, I’ll read it!
Anonymousabout 2 years agoStory was off. Did I read a different story?
1st If Dee is a close friend and saw his dick then shaved it, she could have taken his virginity and he could have taken hers.
2nd Where is the incest, he never touched his mom, just watched Nicole eat his mom out but he never touched his mom
3. Was there another story I should have read first regarding Nicole and Sara?
Be interested if there is a Part 2, maybe some back story and add the incest if you are in that category. At first I thought Dee was his sister.
Thanks for writing. Sammie
