All Comments on 'Mom is a Opportunist'

Good for a first! would have been better if you gave more details about small things. It should feel like I am there, present it as a POV with more details. Also, write LONGER STORIES!!!

You know why your mom changed cloths after your dad got home? I Think your dad is a cuck and he knows about it all.

Good first story - keep writing and things will improve, don’t be afraid to be more descriptive :). But good start

You want feedback? Okay, don't write anything else, this was horrible. If English isn't your first language get an editor.

Does the Mc hate the father? Why would he not give his father a heads up about what going on in his home?

A great story, very well written, definitely made my day :) Hope there is more coming from you, you (and your promiscuous mom :)) are on my Follow list now. She must have been a joy to fuck.

"An Opportunist." Though, filthy skank, cum dumpster and town bicycle would be more appropriate.

I was hoping for more so that is a good sign for you as a new writer.

Let’s read more of your mom’s adventures. I suspect dad knows, so there are many ways this story could go.

Lots of avenues

You do need an editor. You can find one through Literotica. There are links you can follow.

I like the story. I hope that you publish more of them.

He really loves and respects his mother!! Ha!!

Your dad is a cuck, for sure.

Dude, I liked it very much, don't make me wait so hard for the next one.

Not much of a story just a whore of a mother!! And where's the incest! Did not like it!!!!!!!

I want to ask if you were jealous of someone fucking your mother? Did you want sex with your mother and if so will you tell us about what you did and enjoyed.

Dude if this is real it's hot as hell. If it's your imagination you're an awesome storyteller, well done on your first story!

Followed, looking forward to seeing who else cums in your slutty mom

Rubbish!

so very hot. maybe one day he will be ab le t add his cum there too.