by swathyFmly
Are these names common for your country? Because if they are not, and you made them up....where you high? I kept fucking Deepa deepa and deepa in Deepa's pussy. I was so deep inside Deepa that I couldn't get any deepa. Meanwhile Rodan and Mothra are getting ready to take on Godzilla.
Holy cow! Where did you get your English diploma? Google Translator?!
Not to be mean, but if I lied and said your writing is 'good', you'd probably continue writing as you did and won't try to improve your skills. So as it stands your writing is: SHITE!
You got good contents, would be x10 better if you could write proper English.