All Comments on 'Mom Teaches Son Ch. 04'

Does she have hidden cameras or something? How does she know all these things? Anyway, I can't see what she has planned for him at 9:30.

Very interesting storyline indeed!

How hot a young male doesn't have a chance with moms likes our's just wait until she has the blk cock stuffing your young ass you'll love it and it's coming your way.

The above is a valid question. In some areas of your story, I came across repetition after repetition, especially the use of the word cock. Nouns are valid, however substituting with some pronouns once in a while would make your story more readable and show that your vocabulary is more than you indicate. Have you noticed you sometimes use the past tense with a verb when you meant the present one? Spelling isn't too bad, however a few mistakes. Try reading your own story and it may dawn on you to observe exactly what I'm telling you. It's one thing to write a story, but remember that someone is going to read it. If the story is "stressfully" written, it will be "stressfully" read and not well received.