by splitlapper
I give this guy 5's. I like his writing style, a kind of reportage, making it sound like it happened.
Wonderful even if it doesn't rectify with the original ending. Which was to broad and far reaching to begin with. Points for revisiting the characters, but not just taking a whole chapter to just rehash the original. Would like to explore more with Bruce; went down with Karen, what happened when his other friends with MILF mothers found out from blabbermouth Roger, then his mom's sisters cum for a visit and then he inviteds his dad's sister, Karen feeling left out in it's her sisters. So much potential
Hope both moms got knocked up me fucked friends mom she had thick cunt hair went from top of her cunt to top of her ass crack dark brown she was bent over I grabbed her hips rammed my cock in her cunt then into her asshole pushed her on her stomach she was screaming until unload my sperm in her asshole pulled out shot rest inside her cunt that was when I was 18 she was 35 after thaf week told me I had knocked her up