All Comments on 'Moments: His Old Bedroom'

OMG, this was one of the most beautiful love stories I've ever read on Lit. You are one of the handful of exceptional authors who have graced this site. I was transported to that house, that room and that moment. And since you've brought these characters to life so vividly, it would be almost a sin not to let them live again. So yes, PLEASE write another chapter. MLF

Please do write a continuation. Beautifully written, it's an encouragement to toss hurried, passionate love making and truly glory in the incredible pleasures of relationship building (okay...most of the time!) LOL. Thanks!!

I have goosebumps. Absolutely amazing. Completely compelling. Seriously sensual. I could go on and I certainly hope you do, linenmorning. Please do give Zach a turn if only so we learn the name of his well-fucked partner. Five Stars and Following you.

Stunningly beautiful.

Fulfills the site name 100% - literate and erotic. Light years ahead of most of the writing on this site, it is so sensual and involving drawing the reader right into the heart of a deep and loving relationship.

I do hope you find the time to write more because quite simply this quality of writing is life enhancing.