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I have a couple ideas for a second moment so if there's any interest I may write another day in the life of these characters, maybe from Zach's perspective.
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- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 1 year agoStunningly beautiful.
Fulfills the site name 100% - literate and erotic. Light years ahead of most of the writing on this site, it is so sensual and involving drawing the reader right into the heart of a deep and loving relationship.
I do hope you find the time to write more because quite simply this quality of writing is life enhancing.
dnsontnover 1 year agoI have goosebumps. Absolutely amazing. Completely compelling. Seriously sensual. I could go on and I certainly hope you do, linenmorning. Please do give Zach a turn if only so we learn the name of his well-fucked partner. Five Stars and Following you.
Anonymousover 1 year agoPlease do write a continuation. Beautifully written, it's an encouragement to toss hurried, passionate love making and truly glory in the incredible pleasures of relationship building (okay...most of the time!) LOL. Thanks!!
Anonymousover 1 year agoOMG, this was one of the most beautiful love stories I've ever read on Lit. You are one of the handful of exceptional authors who have graced this site. I was transported to that house, that room and that moment. And since you've brought these characters to life so vividly, it would be almost a sin not to let them live again. So yes, PLEASE write another chapter. MLF
