All Comments on 'Mom's Away Father and Son Will Play'

So reminds me of my first lover who was my "daddy." The spit and me taking him in my mouth after he fucked me. But he also loved ws. And i was slightly younger than Trevor and he was 48. Great story.

Damn! What a hot story. Love dad-son sex as well as mom-son stories too. The actual sex between a dad and his son cannot be explained. Love to have cum in me after my step=dad fucked me. He and I were secret lovers when he married my mom. He was a hell of a great lover. Never left me unsatisfied. And, he sucked a mean cock.

I was really enjoying this until you brought out the poppers.... Oh well, going back to finish reading it, but the poppers really takes away a lot of the interest in the story. For me at least. Unfortunately, I know here are many out here who love those things....

come on, if its incest its incest BUT if its gay its gay. recategorize it, nobody wants to read this sheet in incest.

Great story. Next chapter have father and son go into adult store together. Unfortunately the store does not have glory holes so dad makes son suck off strangers in the aisles

Should be under guy section.BEE5

Invest trumps being a gay story. They are actually bi sexual. The intor blurb told you what the story was about. This was a hot sexy story. Loved the build up.

Hi everyone, thanks for the feedback. This is the first erotic story I have ever written, and I'm happy that (most of) you guys like it! I have a lot of ideas for the next stories about Trevor and Brock. I hope that through these two characters I can hone my writing and story telling skills, as well as make a few dicks hard ;)

Thanks again!

And to the people who are complaining that this is GAY incest and not regular, check out the tags...it kinda gives it away!

Stupid fuckers complaining it's gay incest. Does the title not give any clue? Didn't like the references to poppers but well written story. My preference would be to involve the wife but don't think that's your intention.

Soooo HOT post more omg

Very erotic sexy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Brock and Trevor truly and lovingly enjoy each other's bodies. Love the descriptions of cocks and chests -- the hairy chest and abs of Brock, and especially the emerging hairy chest of Trevor -- s sexy sight on a young man! Keep them going!

man this was sooooo hot! father and son fucking on poppers!! blown away!

Very hot story. I would have left out the poppers but that's just my opinion.

It is a very hot and sexy story. Not the run-of-the-mill variety, it is steeped in the incest sex between Father-Son. This is a tempting variety. I guess a son looks up to his father and the father always looks for a young man for satisfaction. This is how Incest Sex gains legitimacy!

Father spitting on his son's tongue is a huge turn on, as there is another spit from the dick, as well, even in the form of pre-cum! It is a great concept and a great story!

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We started slow but soon we were fucking each other and I always got to suck him first as the first time I sucked him he tried to pull out of my mouth but I prevented that and swallowed his load, after that he wanted it first. He did not really like sucking me to completion but I did not care all I wanted was his cum in my mouth, and of course my cute little butt, and I did like fucking him too. Northeast Indiana da.cd@frontier.com

Great story - incest fantasy is a huge turn-on for me, and coupled with bisexual play, it's doubly good!

Very well written So sexy, so descriptivei. IT made me "fly" midway the stoy.

Kudos!

To much of the poppers in this story

Pretty much exactly what happend with me and my dad great story

I loved it. My incest lusts have centered around mature family members and me... especially my mom. There is more to my mommy-son. I am willing to share. I will say this: with time, I learned to love wearing her stockings, panties, negligees, slips...

But I never lusted for my Dad. I did have one summer night encounter with my brother. But this story had me on fire. I took pix of my pre-cum corona and my stained boxers. This story fueled my lust for one of my mature, married, but younger bisexual playmates. We see suppose to meet this morning, but it fell thru.

I love kissing a man ...nipple play ...stroking and sucking cock ...cum and pre-cum. I have been rimmed before. About 3 months ago, I rimmed my first honey pot! I did it twice in two back to back encounters with my divorced mature bisexual pal ...friends with a secret...

I am sitting in my car at our community pool ...touching my nipples and cock ...closing my eyes and fantasizing that I am Brock, sharing with my "Trevor" ...my mature married bisexual son ...or son-in-law...

Writing this brief comment that others will read turns me on. Feel free to share with me your personal encounters and fantasies. I live in Central Texas. Who knows - maybe we could become a "Brock & Trevor" item!

I also could do without the poppers ...a little longer story with more foreplay ...and more editing and correction. I gave it 4 stars, but the author could be a 5-star author!

nasty and hot. excellent

REALLY HOT. You should writemore. I do agree...lesspoppers

Very hot

Lost me with the spitting...

Awesome story.

Well told and such a turn on!

Kept me hard until the end!

More please!

Yes, nothing says true love like eating your own son's ass and then fucking him. Hot story thanks. I too, could do without all the poppers - almost seems like an infomercial.

Haha yeah I agree with the post on spitting. Haha. I don’t get it myself. Not sexy at all. Yuk! Let’s not write stories with people spitting in each others mouths. Agreed? Excellent!

loved it all, a big 5 from me, reading your sexy story got me thinking about my first time with my daddie, yes my dad, i used to hear him fucking my mam, every night hearing mams moans saying she loved my dads big hard cock, i'd seen my dads cock a few times in the shower the first time i saw it he was in the shower he was rubbing his cock it was big hard really big that night in my bed hearing them fucking again my mothers loud moans i was rubbing my hard cock really close to coming hearing my mam hearing my mam yelling fuck me daddy fuck me i'm cumming i'm cumming,, so was i cumming a lot in my shorts thinking of my dads big cock i was a virgin but i want my dad to fuck me a few days later mam was working just my dad and me my chance i went to,his bedroom naked he was laid on his bed,just his shorts on a big hard bulge in his shorts a big long hard on his eyes looking at me what do,you want soni said soft i want you to,fuck me daddie, he did 2 lovely hours none stop his cock deep in my young arse, not the last time his bed my bed,

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