All Comments on 'Mom's Best Friend'

Looking forward to the next chapter of Alice's new experiences with Tyler or some other young college guy.

You need someone to proofread your work prior to post it.

very good

It’s to hard to read in The style you wrote it in.

I couldn't finish it. In the 1st paragraph alone, you jumped back and forth too many times, calling Alice, he, her, he, she, him. You talked of Alice's, not Tyler's 18th birthday, and I had to stop.

Hopefully there’s more coming. Would love to hear how this turns out. Really hoping the kid rails her good & proper.

Complete crap. Consider retirement from writing.

Get an editor.

Pronouns are hard?

Needs an editor