All Comments on 'Mom's Business Trip Ch. 02'

Sorry this story took three years to put out. Before you potentially rip it to shreds allow me to just say:

The first chapter of this story is my highest rated/best work on this site and was very special to me. Every time I attempted this next chapter I was never satisfied with how it was going so I put it off. I felt a pressure to deliver something worth reading and I think this is finally it.

Enjoy.

this is an incredible story, keep up your good work

Really good story. Please don’t take, 2 years, so long to write a follow up Ch. 3. I would love to see Eva and her son join in with Mr Bernard’s “family” of co-workers. Just give us more details, how many are in the family, number of men, women, how often do they get together as a group, etc. Keep the action fun with more surprises. Thank you for your work......

Awesome! Five star story!

I loved the first part and this was well worth the wait. If you do continue it please don't make us wait so long.😁😁

I like the way you led up to them first making love. But you left everyone hanging not knowing what happened next. Does the father find a new love interest and ask his wife for a divorce? Do mom and son hook up as a couple? Does the son give his mother babies?

Of all the genres of incest the mother/son relationships seem to be more erotic. And when mom ask her son for a baby it brings everything together.

Of all of the women I made love to there was only one who I wanted to give my baby to. My sister.

Holy fuck that was hotter than a supernova. I think my eyeballs melted in their sockets reading your story. If you write a third chapter half as hot as this one I might have a heart attack reading it. You are going into my favorited author list.

This was an incredible story! Love it & keep up the great writing..My best. Anna

Been waiting so long for the second part to this.

And thank you for continuing it as well.

I hope we can look forward to more.

Please moree

This is so hot. One of the best I have read. I hope you add another chapter. Have her explain I can't give this up. Is she talking about her son or the job.

5 stars

Continue with a 3rd chapter.. but yes, not another 3 year wait.. this story needs continuing

This chapter is actually better than the first one in my opinion, I wonder how they get on when they return home, what about the husband/dad? I can’t see him taking this silently, perhaps he has something going on outside the family and feels free to pursue that?

Brilliant!!! Part 3 plz.

Fine development, rich, fertile setting. Perfect for adding characters, first, to stimulate Mommy (she always gets sexier the more she's aroused) girls first, it seems...

...then Henri (not Henry) for a big finish to the visit.

*****

I loved this story, but I would have elaborated on Eva’s huge dark brown bush as follows: Her bush was even outsized for her large size! It measured about 10 inches side to side and 9 inches from top to crotch. In addition, it had thick and long hair that wrapped between her legs and up her butt crack. Eating this incredible hairy pussy was a special treat as it helped retain her delicious scent. Matthew made her promise to never remove even one hair because he loved her pussy so much.

Great story (stories?). Thanks for keeping the sex between mother and son. IMO anything like group sex or "sharing" would ruin the storyline. After all, Matthew did say "We don't have sex with anyone but each other".

To ANON: the description of her bush was just fine.

One helluva tale - both parts. Very well put together with imagination running wild. Liked the way the party turned out; never suspected that - figured some sort of group sex, etc. Glad the "boss" never got into her pants aside from sniffing her thong that is. Great job, Author!

Thank you for keeping it between Matthew and Eva. Please keep this going. And again, thanks for not turning Eva into the neighborhood whore.

Looking forward to their next adventure.

[17.08.22]

Deffo worth the wait!

Although honestly, I just came back to re-read chap one but was pleasantly surprised to see chap two.

Again, thanks for not making mom the company bicycle.

And to the ANON from a month ago - NOT everybody is into Trichophilia.

11/10!!!!!

You need to write Chapt. 3. This story deserves continuation.

I also like that Mom didn't become the "company bicycle" like SatyrDick noted just below.

I like that Mom seems to be a bit of an exhibitionist. She was excited by being watched at the party. I think that might be explored further especially with Mathew's consent and help. She also had a good time "making" her "husband" call her mommy in front of others. Great add to the story line and deserves development also.

Please consider very seriously writing another chapter, John

Great so far. How about another chapter?

Didn’t like the sharing with the group.

Will be looking forward to more of this story to see how they progress.

Need a chapter three!!

yes please chapter 3 !!!

It's well known that french bosses throw orgy everytime in their mansion lol

A useless Chapter 2!

More please…. I was so close

Hugs

R

9 months later the boss wonders why his fellow employee is pregnant lol with how drunk everyone would have to be during the party ex specially if he sees pictures of the baby or babies if they son got the mom pregnant

Wonderful story just mom and son now need a part 3 with mum getting pregnant that would be just wonderful incest baby would finish the story

My second reading, I came back yet again, still hoping for a new chapter.. this story deserves one. Beautiful.

I hope you write another chapter.

Definitely glad they kept it between themselves, especially for a new relationship (or evolution of an older one). The exhibitionism is hot, and now they have cover for if he slips and calls her mom as well.

I would've liked another chapter to resolve some things for the future, but liked the two chapters you had.

Thank you for not having her fuck the boss and other guys at the party, I was so afraid that's where you were taking this. Thoroghly enjoyed the story

So she works for a whore house and brought her son into it and just wants to pretend she couldn't fuck everyone else got ya

loved it, it was much better than business trip1, imagine mam son sat close together on the sofa, sons arm behind his mams back her head on his shoulder watching a good film on tv, the film started showing sex the sons fingers lightly stroking the sided of his mams neck just below mams ear, mams soft moans her breathing heavier sons mouth lips on mams forehead softly gently kissing her forehead a couple of times sons eyes looking down in the op of mams low cut blouse looking at mams huge breasts no bra the film on tv showing lots of sex cock deep in mouth deep in cunt deep in arsehole mams breathing lots heavier her huge breasts lifting lots higher sons bulge rock hard in his trousers with his free hand he slowly unzipped his trousers getting his hard cock out it was sticking up high he took hold of his mams hand gently wrapping her hand her fingers round his cock she was holding his hard cock her fingers starting to rub his hard cock son lightly kissing both of mams eyes then the tip of mams nose mam was stroking her sons hard cock he put his fingers under mams chin very slowly lifting her face up to his he saying soft i love you i've wanted you since i was 14 upstairs or upstairs your bed or mine let me make love to you slow gentle deep i want you naked to see your sexy body, the sofa son have me naked on the sofa me naked with you i'm so worked up so turned on wanting you your big cock deep in me all of it

JT

This was really good, it made me feel like it was real and it was still sexy, erotica, and taboo. You easily earned 5 stars for this great story!

The series info says you're still working on this. I would love to get a final chapter to wrap up the few unfinished threads as we see how Mathew and Eva figure out how to make that happen.

But thank you for a great read!

I loved this story. I think there could be more. Kee writing please.

Feels like a hard turn left from chapter 1. I don’t even understand the heck happened…..

Would really like to see one more chapter. Was as good second time as first. Please add more soon

Yep the French dude gave off massive creeper vibes right away. I mean he's all over her and groping her ass right after meeting her, despite them both being married. What a sleazeball.

As expected the party was some sex party shit (rich idiots don't have anything better to do I suppose) but at least it wasn't an orgy. They just wanted to watch them fuck. I'm not even gonna ask why the company does this shit. And what was with the belt around her neck to control her a bit like a submissive? That was random.

Anyway, this could use a part 3 at the very least to explore their relationship properly, maybe get her pregnant, and deal with the new situation as they arrive back home.

Anonymous who wants to see her join "the family"HELL NO!!!The author nailed it when he said we only have sex with each other!! This is incest stories,not slut,butts and hoes SMGDH!!!

Of course it's the French dude.

Good stories needs 3rd part

2cd time reading and agree needs one more part to finish story.

Great story. Matthew and his mother put on a great show for everyone at the party. Not much about talk about her big ass. There still needs to be more mother fucking.